Hi Riley I am not a fan of horror movies, but I do like how you have broken down the genre and explained it more fully. You have a good understanding of the genre and how horror movies have been made. Perhaps next time you could be talking over the clips, as there are some that are quite long...
You have written your essay really well, and creating a video essay has made the presentation really interesting. Well done! Mrs D
Kia ora Riley Wow - this is very cool and really captures your love of horror movies. What an interesting way to present this. Creating a video I think will really appeal to your audience which is probably going to be kids from another school. I think to make it even more appealing, a voice over would be good. Have a go at some really sensationalist/spooky voices.
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Hi Riley
ReplyDeleteI am not a fan of horror movies, but I do like how you have broken down the genre and explained it more fully.
You have a good understanding of the genre and how horror movies have been made.
Perhaps next time you could be talking over the clips, as there are some that are quite long...
You have written your essay really well, and creating a video essay has made the presentation really interesting.
Well done!
Mrs D
Kia ora Riley
ReplyDeleteWow - this is very cool and really captures your love of horror movies. What an interesting way to present this. Creating a video I think will really appeal to your audience which is probably going to be kids from another school.
I think to make it even more appealing, a voice over would be good. Have a go at some really sensationalist/spooky voices.